Project3 the second proposal

The second proposal for the project3 is much closed to the final one, i aleady set a central courtyard as the focus of the building arrangement, and the courtyard regarded as the mian character of the building, and also the way of catching natural light, and i already made the glass curtain wall for the main facade of the building so the peoplr walking on the street can see the arts works displaying in the gallery and the artist working in his workshop, that is the way i plan to attract people.

My tutor pointed out that, i should increse the couryard space by reducing the stairs i put in it, and gather the transportations to one spot, and there should be a eaiser way for people to see the art works and working artist in the gallery, also the shape of the building should not be too borning. And i should focus on details, like making the huge wall that enclose the courtyard more interesting.